If I take a run at it it's not really that bad, at least in the first para, though the second para deteriorates a lot. But it's remarkable for its time as an extremely poor form of writing in a document like this. And since I was mainly hoping just to skim through quickly looking through key names or topics I'm not really appreciating it. Though if reading it as a whole it would be better. But more effort than I wanted.
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Date: 2023-11-20 03:17 pm (UTC)